Can someone please give me some feedback on my poem?

I loved that poem!!!! I was really intrigued and I love the Edgar Allen Poe structure!!! It was phenomenal and in my opinion it should be published. It amazes me what one can create out of simple boredom. I think you wrote a amazing poem and I loved the whole story and meaning of it all. I am really left out of words because I really don't know how to describe your poem but it was amazing. Keep writing you have talents!!! Great Job!!!!! : )